IMPROVING WRITING ACHIEVEMENT OF GRADE X-9 STUDENTS AND THEIR ACTIVE PARTICIPATION THROUGH CONTROLLED WRITING TECHNIQUE AT SMA MUHAMMADIYAH 3 JEMBER
Abstract
Writing is considered to be one of the important language skills in learning 
English. However, many students still experience difficulties in writing simple 
paragraphs. The difficulties are about the linguistic and rhetorical problem entailed in 
writing. This research focused on the aspects of grammar, vocabulary, organization, 
and content. One of the way that could be done to solve these problem was by 
applying controlled writing technique in teaching learning process of writing. The 
problem of the research was how can the use of controlled writing technique improve 
the students’ writing achievement and participation in writing class. This research 
was undertaken to improve grade X-9 students’ writing achievement in writing a 
descriptive paragraph by using the controlled writing technique at SMA 
Muhammadiyah 3 Jember in the 2010/2011 academic year. This research was done 
because of the finding that grade X-9 students at SMA Muhammadiyah 3 Jember still 
had difficulties  in writing a paragraph. To achieve the purposes of the research, a 
collaborative classroom action research was implemented. The research consisted of 
four general steps, that were the planning of the action, the implementation of the 
actions, classroom observation, evaluation and reflection of the actions. The research 
was applied in two cycles with three meetings in each cycle. The number of the 
research subjects was 42 students. The data collection methods used were writing test and observation. Writing test was used to measure the students’ writing achievement, 
while observation was used to monitor the students’ active participation in the 
teaching learning process of writing by using controlled writing technique. In the first 
cycle, the result of the action could not reach the target requirement of the research 
which was only 66% of the research subjects achieved the targeted score requirement 
that was 70. Moreover, the students showed improvement on their active participation 
in the teaching learning process of writing using controlled writing technique. It 
could be seen from  the  results of  observation  which showed that the students’ 
participation  in the teaching and learning process of writing increased  from 66.7% 
(meeting one) and 71.4% (meeting two) in the first cycle to 71.4% (meeting one) and 
78.5% (meeting two) in the second cycle. 
Then, the new version of teaching writing by using controlled writing 
technique was implemented in the second cycle to improve the students’ writing 
achievement. The result showed improvement that was 76% of the research subjects 
achieved the targeted score 70 or higher. Moreover, the result of observation showed 
the improvement of the students’ active participation in joining writing class. It was 
found that 71.4% of the students in meeting one and 78.5% in meeting two were 
actively involved in the teaching learning process of writing by using controlled 
writing technique. 
Based on the above results, it could be concluded that the use of controlled 
writing technique could improve the students’ active participation in the teaching 
learning process of writing and it could also improve the students’ writing 
achievement at SMA Muhammadiyah 3 Jember in the 2010/2011 academic year. 
Therefore, it is suggested to the English teacher to apply controlled writing technique 
in the teaching learning process of writing in order to help students who still have 
difficulties in writing.